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DIGITAL

STORYTELLING

EDITON TIME

 

HOW TO EDIT YOUR STORY

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So far, you have already created your story. Now, the idea is to check some elements in order to improve it. The first filter is going to be your teacher. She will revise the text to note some advice or commentaries related to the text structure, drafting, grammar and content. Once she has finished, you must edit your story, taking into account all the commentaries the teacher has noted in your text. 

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Then, there will be a second filter: one of your classmates. 

In this second part of the edition, one of your classmates may use a format which has been included into this section (below). It contains some questions that second editor will answer according to your story. This time focused mainly in the structure, and the content.  

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Remember you will have the same role too, being part of the process of edition of one of your partners. You must fill the form below after reading one of your classmates stories. Be honest, respectful and critic about this edition process. 

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1. TRIM EXCESS WORDS

Here you have an option to download the first form for self editing. You must fill the form according to the structure and the content of your own story. Once you have finished it, save it on your PC and upload the file in the Dropbox option below. Remember you will have this form, the commentaries of your teacher and the second one (your classmate) to edit your story. 

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form I

FORM I-SELF EDITING

Self Editing 

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2. REPLACE STUFFY WORDS WITH SIMPLE ONES

3. REMOVE REDUNDANCIES

Peer Editing 

Who will be a good reader of your story? One of your classmates!

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Here you have an option to download the form for peer editing. You must fill the form according to the structure and the content of one of your classmate´s story. Once you have finished it, save it on your PC and upload the file in the Dropbox option below. Remember this step is so important for your classmates writing process and their final product. Therefore, do it with respect and commitment. 

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form II

FORM II-PEER EDITING

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4. NIX "THAT" 

6. DITCH THE PASSIVE VOICE

Taken from: 25 Editing Tips by TWL Team: https://thewritelife.com/edit-your-copy/

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